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2003 Florida Trip: Prompts

 Sunday, February 9, 2003

Prompt: Expectations

You will be with your peers and teachers for a week. Describe for Mr. Rottiers your expectations for this week in an essay. Before you begin the essay, think about ways in which this trip will be a learning experience for you. How will your experiences help you in the future? Specifically, comment on a few experiences that you have been looking forward to and why. Now write an essay in which you relate your expectations for this trip.


The Florida trip will be the first time I have been away from my family for a week. At first, I was very worried about what would happen. Would I have everything I need? Would I be able to keep track of the schedule? This trip will be a major lesson in managing my own affairs. I am hoping that everything will go smoothly and I will come home in a good condition.

I have been looking forward to seeing some of the places in Florida. I haven’t been to Disney World before, and though I’m wary of commercial empires, I’m sure it will be fun. In addition, I’m interested in seeing the NASA space center. I’ve wondered what it would be like in space and how different daily life would be.

On the academic side, the writing prompts re not a major annoyance. Writing an essay on a topic at the moment’s notice is not something I’m particularly good at, but I wouldn’t mind practice. I’ve already finished my math work for the week, so I don’t have to bring my textbook. I have three books to read, two for school assignments and one other. I have an assignment in English and may wind up with others.

As far as the daily schedule, I am expecting to go to a lot of interesting and educational places. I expect to have fun with friends and down time to sort myself out at the hotel. I think the idea of a trip for the 8th grade to Florida is a bold on. It could probably compared to Outdoor Ed in 6th grade and the Williamsburg trip this year. I had a part (albeit a small one) in the planning of a trip by creating a computer program to lay out people’s names from the trip database onto the hotel grid.

I hope to have fun in Florida. Replacing a normal week of school with a trip to lots of interesting places certainly has caused excitement, and it’s a nice break from the routine. However, I will definitely be happy when I arrive home on Friday and everything returns to normal. I will miss my family!

- Matt McCutchen


Dear Mr. Rottiers,

At first, I thought that the trip would be almost all play, and little work, but recently, I found that I was hopelessly misled. So now, instead of expecting afternoons of frolicking in the sun, I am left with the not-as-tempting idea of plenty of work per day (no offense to any educator intended). Anyway, besides the gloomy prospect of essays, I expect to learn much about space from NASA, and also about Disney at Disney World. This will be the first time I've been to Florida, and I hope it will be both enlightening and entertaining.

With a load of scientific information crammed into my head at NASA, I could learn to become an astronaut or a scientist someday. Or, I could later join Disney and work with them on new animated films or rides. I believe that somehow, in one form or another, I will be able to put to use what I will learn, if only to guide my family when we come again this summer.

I would be lying if I said that Disney World was not the top of my list of expectations. This would be my first time to a Disney place, and I'm really excited. Next would be NASA, home of the US space program. It would be supremely interesting to see the best space center in the country.

Besides all the sites on the trip, I am also looking forward to getting to know my teachers better. It would be (somewhat) interesting to see what teachers are like in the mornings.

- Allen Zhang


Prompt: St. Augustine

 GENERAL TOPIC: The class you have just taken is a new addition to the Florida trip. Write an essay describing the class. Include a course description, what liked about the class, what improvements, in any, you would make, and what new things you learned from the class. Indicate whether this activity should be included in next year’s trip. Explain your rationale. SPECIFIC CLASS TOPICS: (Florida Indian Program): Use your imagination and write three diary entries describing the life of the Timucua Indian. Include 3 aspects of daily life such as food, shelter, family life, recreation activities, etc. (Fort Program): Try to envision what life was like as a runaway slave searching for Fort Mose and what it felt like to finally arrive safely. Write three diary entries about your imaginary experience. (Florida Cracker): From the point of view of a new settler, write a letter to relatives back home and share some of your experiences, successes and disappointments following your arrival in Florida.


The class I took at St. Augustine is called the Florida Cracker class. Not as a term for a white people, a Cracker, in truth, is a term for Florida pioneers, because they would crack whips to summon their herds of cows that would hide in the scrub. As a general overview of what we did, we generally experienced life in St. Augustine in 1821, when the Spanish retreated to the Caribbean. Our instructor guided us through a one-room school shed where we wrote with ink and quill pens. From there we ground corn, then sifted it to separate the grit from the cornmeal. Then, we learned how to grind sugar cane for syrup, and how to pump water. I liked all the hands-on activities we were able to do. I personally, became a mule. Along with three others, us mules ground the sugar cane with a big device.  I also enjoyed writing with the ink pen, though it left a mark on my nail. I was able to pet the comb of a rooster named Mark Anthony after a Roman Captain (the hen was named Cleopatra). Watching others participate in grind corn was fun as well. The environment could have been much bigger in my opinion. Also, the weather could have agreed with us and not made me wet and cold. Shopping was fun, and there were plenty of stores, but I had to eat lunch two hours after breakfast, and that wasn’t too pleasant. Those are the only improvements I see necessary to implement.

I was able to grain much knowledge from the short time spent there. For one, I learned that crackers are not just white people, but in fact a term for Florida pioneers. Secondly, I learned that writing with a quill isn’t as easy as it looks. Furthermore, a John Hancock was another term for signature because John Hancock signed the declaration of Independence larger than anyone else. Finally, I learned that there was much to be done, from removing the kernels to sifting, to make cornmeal. This trip on day one has already proved to be educational!

I would strongly recommend this experience for years to come. I am positive that classes next year will e as fun as mine was, if not more (it could be sunny for them). Shopping was fun and being a mule was, well, humbling to say the least. Perhaps next year the classes might be more exciting with less rain. Time will tell, but do include the St. Augustine portion into the trip!

- Max Lockwood


Entry 1:

Dear Diary,

            I can hardly believe it. Just two weeks ago, I was doing unpaid forced labor for a family of English bureaucrats. Today, I have reached Fore Mose. When I arrived, I was welcomed fairly warmly and put immediately to work, however, I am being paid. I know that new earnings aren’t anything big, but they will be enough to provide food and shelter for my family and me. I’m sure my life will be very pleasant here.

Entry 2:

Dear Diary,

            Today is candle-making day. Today we will make the candles that we will use for the rest of the year. What we do is take a piece of wood with three folded strings hanging on it, repeatedly dip them in boiling wax, and wait for them to dry. It is extremely easy but it takes a lot of patience and time.

Entry 3:

Dear Diary,

            Today the British led an attack on our fort. Some of us went into a safe room inside of the fort, while the rest of us went to man the cannons. Form what I heard from other people in the safe room, this fort had never been defeated. This seemed to make sense seeing as the fort was still under Spanish control. After many loud booms, word came to us that the fort was once again victorious.

- Avi Silber


I just took the Fort Mose class and it was very fun, although I didn’t learn much except for what things were used for.  I liked that the class was fun and hands-on; however, I’d have liked to learn more about the slaves’ lives.

The new things that I learned were mainly about what material things were used for.  We learned that the Spaniards bathed thrice in their life, that guard stools had two legs to make sure that the guards wouldn’t sleep.  If they did, they fell over.  We also learned that the colonists made cornmeal by mashing it into flour in a stone bowl with a cylindrical tool.  Also we learned that they had the classed game of “try to get the ball on the string into the cup”.  Another interesting thing was their drills.  It consisted of a circular piece of wood with a bit at one end and a rod at the other.  You would wind a rectangular piece with string around the rod to get the bit to spin and cut through wood.  Also, they made candles by dipping wicks in fallow of animal fat.

If I were to make some improvements to this class, there would probably be one main improvement.  This improvement would be to learn more about the people who lived in those places, not just the things they worked with.  Anyone can use a drill; not everyone can fight off the British of French or discover a peninsula.  Also I would have kept the number of things explained to two or three.  After a couple of items, you understand that life was primitive back then.

-Mark Siegel


The class I took today was the Florida Cracker pioneer class.  In this class, we learned about the lifestyles of the people who settled into Florida after the United States purchased it from Spain.  We performed hands on activities, like writing with quill pens and making corn meal, that simulated what life was like during that period of time in Florida.  Everything looked like it had been from that time period.

I learned many things from this class, but especially about Floridian history.  From this class, I learned that the Florida government actually gave away land to entice people to come to Florida.  This was because they needed 40,000 voters (white, male, and land owners) in order for Florida to become a state instead of a territory.  This class also immersed us in the daily life routines of someone my age, from writing with quill pens, to playing with Jacob’s ladder, to making cornmeal.  I learned through this class many things about Floridian history that I wouldn’t have otherwise known about.

I loved the way this class was hands on.  I actually got to experience a little bit of what it was like to be a Floridian pioneer.  I think it was clever of the guide to include a history lesson along with the activities.  It was not only fun, but informative as well.  After walking away, I feel like I have gained a greater insight into the life of Florida pioneer, and the life they led. 

I would definitely recommend this class for next year.  It wasn’t your conventional boring lecture by a tired tour guide.  The guide, instead of boring us, really heightened the experience for us by getting into the character and acting as pioneer herself.  I was also surprised to the extant to which I retained what the guide told me.  This class is entertaining, but it is not a trade-off between fun and educational.  It is both.  I really enjoyed the class and I think that next year’s students will enjoy it too.  This class has everything, and I think that it more than made up for getting soaked by the heavy rain.

- Jeff Guo


The Florida Cracker class that I have just taken was both very interesting and educational. At this class, we learned about what life was like during the 1800's in Florida. I liked many aspects of this class, but feel that some improvements could be made. In the end, this class should definitely be included in next year's Florida Trip.

During this class, we were taught about life in Florida around the 1800's. We started in a small schoolhouse, where we learned about typical school life two centuries ago. Because paper was very expensive, there was generally only one set of books for the entire school. Schools consisted of only one room, but about six grades were taught. For individual studies, horn books were passed around, which are paddles with small pieces of text on them. To write, the children used slates and chalk, and occasionally paper and quills. Also while in the schoolroom, the tour guide told us about the typical life of a Floridian. When the US government bought Florida from Spain (for five million dollars), United States citizens were given the land to live, farm, and make houses on. Here, women were restricted from voting and sometimes married just to get land. The foregoing facts are ones that I have just learned today from my visit to the Florida Cracker class.

Although this class was intriguing, there was still room for it to improve. The class should provide an indoor facility, in case the weather is bad (as it was today). Also, there should be more tools, so that everyone in the tour has an equal opportunity to view the demonstrations. Despite these improvements, I liked the interactive part of the class (writing on the paper) and the demonstrations of cracking corn and sugar cane. For these reasons, the Florida Cracker class should definitely be included in next year's Florida trip. It provides both interactive and educational parts of Colonial History, which we have been studying. I enjoyed the Florida Cracker class, and I am looking forward to the next upcoming one.

- Dylan Rebois

 

 

 

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