MONTGOMERY COUNTY
BOARD OF EDUCATION
SNIPS
OUTDOOR EDUCATION
FROM ITS BUDGET

A Persuasive Writing WebQuest Created and Developed by
Carole Tauber
Cabin John Middle School
carole_tauber@fc.mcps.k12.md.us
April 2001

Introduction
Task
Process
Evaluation
Reflection
Teacher Page

Introduction

Outdoor Education is cut from the Montgomery County Public School's budget. Some people are applauding the decision while others are incensed.

 

Task

You are part of a team of sixth graders who are trying to "rescue" Outdoor Education and get the decision reversed. Read your task description carefully. You want Outdoor Education to be included in the sixth grade curriculum. You are launching a letter writing campaign aimed at the important stakeholders on this issue. As a team member you are required to write persuasive letters to two different stakeholders and complete several forms. The team with the most successful letter writing campaign, the one that gets the Board of Education to reverse the decision, will receive a special tribute.

 

Process

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Step One~Form your letter writing teams. Each team will have four members. Brainstorm a list of reasons why Outdoor Education is an important event for a sixth grader. Consider cabin living, meeting new people, classes, and other activities that are part of the Outdoor Education experience. Collect information about outdoor education so that you can write an articulate and informed letter. Find a description of the importance of the program. Use information collected in your outdoor education journal as a resource, too.

Step Two~Mobilize your forces! Each team member is assigned his/her two stakeholders and jigsaws with members on other teams with the same task. As a group, brainstorm the appropriate information for the specific letters. Your letter must address the stakeholders' special interests in a manner that will convince them that the Outdoor Education experience is essential. A persuasive letter has already been sent to Sue Case, CEO of the Delightful Duffle Company, but there are more letters that need to be written.

Step Three~Meet the Stakeholders

Chloe Z. Horst
Belle Lee
Ed U. Kator
Maya Boots
Izzie "Prince" Opal
Parker Ranger
Pam and Perry Tents
Minnie Driver
Chloe Z. Horst
She is a sixth grader very concerned about her appearance~especially her clothes. She is worried that she will have to wear a uniform and not make her very unique fashion statement at Outdoor Education. She wants to know more about how much time a sixth grader has in the morning to get ready and what kind of clothing she is required to wear.

Belle Lee
Belle Lee is food provider for large groups and institutions. Her company, Belle Lee Full , is among the county's most successful small female-owned businesses. She currently has the contract to service the food needs of all of Montgomery County Public Schools Outdoor Education sites. This includes the regular three meals students and staff consume as well as the evening snack. Her company also provide the food for the animals at the sites. She needs to be reminded of the number of students who attend Outdoor Education each year and what the termination of the program would mean to her business.

Ed U. Kator
Ed's an M.C.P.S. teacher who must attend both sessions of Outdoor Education because there are not enough male teachers to chaperone the boys' cabins. He feels guilty spending so much time away from his students; he doesn't even teach sixth graders. If there are not enough male teachers to supervise the cabins, the sixth graders certainly would not be able to attend Outdoor Education. The Board of Education raised this concern and used it when it released its decision to cancel Outdoor Education. It would be really helpful to have Ed on your side in your effort to restore the Outdoor Education program.

Maya Boots
Maya owns a sporting goods store that sells flashlights, hiking boots, sleeping bags, and other camping necessities. Naturally she is interested in reversing this decision, but she doesn't know how she can help. Suggest some strategies for Maya.

Izzie "Prince" Opal
Mr. Opal is the administrator at your school. He has been working for the school system and knows many influential people. He got the nickname "Prince" because they treated him like royalty at the Board of Education. You need him to pressure school board members to reverse their opinion. He needs to be reminded of the benefits of the Outdoor Education program for sixth graders and use that information in a persuasive appeal for the repeal of the decision to end Outdoor Education.

Parker Ranger
Parker has been working at the Summit Lake and Smith Center sites for 20 years. He has seen many sixth graders come and go. He has also seen first hand the impact the Outdoor Education experience makes on these boys and girls. He hates to write letters but loves to see
people enjoying nature. Somehow you must convince Parker to write a letter to the "Board" about the value of students experiencing an education outside the school building.

Pam and Perry Tents
Mr. and Mrs. Tents are typical sixth grade parents. They are not sure the Outdoor Education experience is worthwhile. They don't understand why their child has to go away to have classes. They wonder if it is worth the charge. They're concerned about adult
supervision and medical care. They wonder about the cabin conditions. In fact, they're kind of relieved that Outdoor Education has been terminated. You need to convince them that their fears are unfounded, and that it would be a great loss to their child and other sixth graders not to have the Outdoor Education experience.

Minnie Driver
Yes, Minnie is a movie star, but when she is not working in films, she drives the bus to Outdoor Education. She feels that even the trip to the site is an important experience for sixth graders. She is going to put that in her letter to the "Board" along with other convincing details. Encourage her to do everything she can to restore the Outdoor Education program.

Step Four~Now you have met the stakeholders. It is time to write each of them a letter. You and your teammates will decide who writes the specific letters. Read the task outline carefully.

Step Five~Each team must submit a set of eight letters to the school board. There is a deadline. The quality and speed with which you handle this matter will have an enormous impact on future sixth graders. Be certain that each letter addresses the special interests of its recipient. Make specific recommendations about what should be in the letters and how important it is for the stakeholder to write the letter. Thoroughly prepare your letter. Use a Q & A model. Use your Outdoor Education journal as resource for writing as well.

Step Six~Incorporate the prewriting materials into the persuasive letter. Use the letter writing template. Use your Outdoor Education journal as resource for writing as well.

Option #1~How Passionate Are You?~Demonstrate how strongly you feel about this issue by creating a "Rescue Outdoor Ed" or "Save Outdoor Ed" T-shirt. Most demonstrators committed to their cause wear a shirt that communicates the desire and PASSION for a change in a policy. (optional)

Option #2~What's it like someplace else?~Examine Outdoor Education programs at other schools outside of MCPS. How do they compare? Create a VENN diagram to display your findings. (optional)

Location A
Location B

 

Evaluation

The completed project must include eight letters, a Q & A for each stakeholder, a reflection sheet for each team member, and a rubric for each letter.
The letters will be evaluated based on the PASSIONATE ISSUE
rubric.

Remember you are trying to convince the stakeholder to participate in your effort to reverse a school board decision. You need to convince the stakeholder that the decision will impact him/her as well as the sixth graders. You must inspire passion about the issue and intense motivation. You have got to get the stakeholder to write the letter to the school board.

 

Reflection

Take a moment to complete the survey sheet. Consider what you learned about persuasive writing and passion for a position. How can you use what you have learned in the future? What have you learned about the strategies one needs to convince others to sympathize with a controversial position.

 

 

Teacher Page

Objectives, strategies, pre-task activities, etc. are included on the teacher page. Acknowledgment to the Takoma Park web page that has excellent informational resources on Outdoor Education as well as the MCPS Outdoor Education site. The William and Mary persuasion materials created a framework for this task. Teacher Page